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Old 06-03-04, 10:33 PM   #1
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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valor
your lines were really strecthed and fucked up... bad structure work on dat
but ur punches and flow was workin nice
bestline:your lines are so incrediblely wack that my lines will always place ABOVE YOU.....
endin it with rymes that basically YELL OUT you suck and FUCK YOU.....
that had good flow and a nice punch
kinda stretched so work on ya strucutre
other than that good *7*
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virginia fool
your verse sucked literally
work on structure flow punches evrything
try to get some personals in
opener: WACK!
body terrible
closer: PRETTYT WEAK AS WELL
so thats why valor got my vote for today
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