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Old 06-03-04, 10:57 PM   #8
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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white gold your flow was ok but didnt get the jopb done ur structure was better than his
youm had not very good punchlines and too short of lines not good
this was a weak battle
WHITE GOLD *3*
overall keep workin and ull get there
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you wernt much betetr you both need to work on ya punches cuz ya flow was way off
evrything was off in this battlei shouldnt really have to explain even though this battle was weak
it was one sided
bretheren no suprise you win
overall 4* and you get my vote
my vote brethern
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