v/ L.I.

Made more sense.. less filler.. harder punches.. better use of personals.. flowed fine.. opener an closer got off to a good start an wrapped up well respectively.. used the quote well.. DV.. alot of played concepts.. don`t need to use "" to emphasise words neither.. seemed there was alot of filler in there.. unlike ya opponent you opened an closed horribly with ya last lines.

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