I was feelin that..that was actually really dope..You didn't have just one over all concept..you had a few...your metas were on point...imagery was more difficult just because it's a more difficult subject to try and fathom...So imagery is not even an issue...great ideas...and great way of expressing them....I give you a 40/50...docking the 10 points because regardless of your many great ideas, you didn't really have much to put behind each one of your thesis statements....I'm not saying your not well educated and you couldn't have...I'm just saying you didn't..and i would of liked to see that...It's like..how would we believe people were on the moon without written facts to support it? You dont gotta dig that deep...but you catch my drift..thatd be cool if you could check out my topical keystyle..it's called immortal technique topical..it'll be close to the top...so check it..or don't check it...either way....good drop..keep bangin...2 fingas one love

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