Black Thief still...
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errr...you seem real so Im gonna be real to you....It was a decent drop,don't get wrong, but I just seen this spit so many times in so many different forms....thats the thing that's bittersweet bout open mic:no matter how original you may think your spit is...more than likely someone else has done it....
But I was feelin it....the structure was pretty good...no hitches in it
my fav part?
How could I do to another what was once done to me/
I grew up in a song but could never sing on key/
fuck it, do onto the world as the worlds done onto you/
thought about it some more figured thats what I would do/
but than i found something out, something that would change me forever/
the woman I cared for told me she'd love me through whatever/
how could I leave her with the responsibility that I helped create/
i started to cry, feeling My love come from hate/a few months later, my responsibility was finally here/
looked into it's new blue eyes and asked "what did I fear?"/
now I know this is the point of no return i can never go back/
how could I turn away from the Only two that would ever love me back?/
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pretty straight man...I can see you spittin with emotions...thats what makes it decent...if it wasn't for that....I probably wouldn't have even left a reply...but keep doin you fam.
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