rascal when you come ova to this side?????

but yeah here the break down

flow-R
closer-R
opener-R
punches-R
personals-Tie
structure-Tie
creativity-R
enjoyment-R

rascal's best bar

now people said your good.. there just silly,
you cudnt "cum Phat" if you ejaculated free willy"


^^^yo mand that shit had me cracking up....nice punch

you could work on your structure a little bit becuase it was stretched in quite a bit of places.....your punches seemed weak compared to who hard you usually come over on Old RB......your ish was gud man just workon your punches and work on your structure a lil bit man and everything should be fine man..........keep elevating


outsiders best bar


this bitch, said dat commnt about ejaculating, dats only you when you shower/
pretending to talented, but all i see is dat ur demented, i'll kill you wid my powers/

^^^sucks that that was your best bar others didnt rhyme

tackle and draculars only rhyme if you force it and you should never have to force your rhymes.....fith left dont rhyme either man.......i dont know if you have anywins on your record but only way i see you gettin wins with that type of rhyme sceem is if you use that shit against KKKhater......you need to elevate and work on your rhyme sceem and shit.....peace

v/Rascal

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