GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP:
3 losses to ure name, it’s only ure wackness that’s grown
Tryin to rip off Nelly song’s still won’t get ure ass known
Signed ure ass away, give me 10-15 lines, I cud beat u in one
If I see you fightin a bear, I’ll jump in just to help your mom
^^^ very hard hitting opener...and his name itself made me laught when I saw it...lol
I ain’t gonna bother dropping the full 15, I’m gonna stop at ten
And if u want me after this battle, I’d be happy to make u lose again!!
^^ hard hitting and personal...more complex rhyming and multies would have made this tighter...
20/30
For posting ya mugshot you should catch a case/
Looks like someone popped a wheeley on his face/
The only reason you were made is because God had skin to waste/
Next time dont take a picture until you clean your place /
^^ Funny...but way too simple and not very damaging to him...and enough with the SMILEY CONS please...
^^^ word on complexity in punches...wordplay..etc
Vote: King
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