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Old 06-04-04, 03:38 PM   #6
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accomp - a good spit....nothing extraordinary...but good flow....punches were funny...but not complex....good wordplay....personals were def there....good meta or two...just 8 lines so u didnt have much in there....but u did good with that amount....

dirtboy - it was very stretched....so no flow...punches were decent....personals were okay...woulda been better with more wordplay....u had the meta's in this battle....but not the punches or personals....and ur stretched lines fucked ur flow up....elevate on ur wordplay and that will help ur verse a lot...

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