smoke
Rumble and rage u destine to die as you countin ya days
U doubting the ways u pray, $moke got you lost in tha haze nice multie, hence flow...
Feelin’ the Blaze It’s Hot the $Rich’s is stuck in tha cage
I staged the end of ya chapter now I’m flippin’ tha page damn.....
Connectin’ punches wit ya Jaw and Bitch I’m hittin you hard
Watchin you fall turn to the crowd and watch em applaud ok....
Deadly venom spittin at cha, with one bite you’ll be dead
Ya lyrics Suck, wouldn’t be bright wit a fuckin light on ya head nice.....
You’ll verbally curse ya verse and leave a horrible impression
Keep spittn wack verses and you gon’ end up wit a ugly infection ok.....
You couldn’t spit a good verse if you was reading a scripture
God forgive me but this stupid clown just don’t get the picture ok....
I’m done wit this cat I’m out… I got nothin’ to prove
Here’s where the audience covers their mouth, points at u and you hear a big
OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH hahah nice...original


rich
my mind is feeble and i'm built to destroy, i designed evil/
i can't be hit cause i "stick~and~move" like "blind~people"/nice....
you flowin' recklace, kid you just "failed~the~test"/
plus ya spellin' is all jumbled like an "essay~without~a~spell~check"/no flow...but prety good
i aint a gangsta but don't under estimate me/
gotta big heart but please don't try to play me/weak...
i'm dangerous, the last emcee to step i tossed him/
chopped his body and left the pieces in the "Creek~with~Dawson".nice wordplay
i was told to flow from the heart so thats what i'm doin'/
this kid smokeskreen's career i'm bout to ruin/no....
plus i'm jackin' you for ya lunch and i'm takin' ya last buck/
and the "bathrooms~aint~free" so you "shit~out~of~luck"/nice.....
you think you illa than the illest, how you figure/
i "eat~emcees" all day and still manage to "keep~my~slim~figure"/ooooooooooo...damn
i'll end it with a teaser to sit and watch ya brains spill/
even if you used "i will" abbreviated you still couldn't be "ill"/that was original...none of that hiv or disease comparisons

k this was a hard choice...im reading again....
both are honest tied...but i gotta go with the first guy for consistency basically...flow was all arounded better although you had like one weak line....but his was more on point.....sry if this is the wrong choice...just going with my gut instinct...but i respect you both for nice verses.....so vote goes to smokescreen