Rip Open your splean..Lookin at your av is the only time you see green-
Glued Everyones eyeballs to ya ass cheeks..and ur "shit still aint seen"-
Your Rhymes are just a joke..only takes 1 line to emberass you
Talkin bout u floatin to the top of the charts..rip open your parachute-

^^ Good opener..One correction...GALL BLADDER makes you see green...lol

Beatin me!..I wish you luck..Rip Out Your Ribs so you can kiss the dust-
Kid's gotta dickrider express card..but all your d/r's just missed-the-bus-


^^ Not so sure I get the DUST part...but the 2nd line is good

Burnt to crisp..<-thats what the detective said when i burnt you, Bitch-
slit your wrist..on that young couple and devorce break up type shit-
Just So Sick...dis "dawg" Spits poisonous venom..so betta not get licked-

^^^ decent lines...

**pretty hard hitting...not much to critique...maybe up wordplay

25/30


Genetically imposed by terms, words enforcing demise at anytime.
Force my bars down his throat but still couldn’t “read between the lines.”

^^^^ HERE'S SOME ADVICE...DON'T GIVE YOUR OPPONENT PROPS BEFORE YOU SPIT..perhaps after...but never before..it's like you're conceding the battle in my opinion

this line is played...

When I consume terms, and position a verbal surprise attack.
Then lyrically spit "knowledge" so Killa couldn't "think" to fight back.
Your rhymes are wack, just realize you took the "L" on this big time
Do I have to explain why he was giving hints to find his punchlines? (Hmmm...)


^^ good attempt at metas/wordplay in your punches...but they don't connect like intended...

20/30


Vote: Killa