Ight, since I know both of you and we coo and all, I'm going to break it down good for yeah...


Almost pissed his pants seein that I didn’t post….....thought I no showed…
Hopes were crushed when the truth was broke…doesn’t like heavy loads…
Really good intro, flow was on point

Stick to ya audio’s……………….cause text woesnt meant for your type…
On ya way you go…………...name in the title, hype goes down the pipe…
was an ok line, didn't hit very hard though
Already handed a loss……………not one of your verses got us intrigued…
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Originally Posted by DeadlyVision
L.I. Stop fuckin wit those nooobs....lol

I just keep getting stuck wit em…for example this weeks battle in the league…
Really tight line, but was off topic, remember this is a battle

Shit is tense till your verse is dropped…….then straight to amusing…
Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing…
Hot shit, really tight, fa sho

Get ya weak ass outta here, bein run over like a game of red rover…
If you want us to fall for them lines, give us sometin to trip over…
Really tight hardhitting punch, but should have been used earlier


kido u dont like womens!! see you aint gonna get no bare hits, I can spare wits..
Your ass like popular opinions even R and Profilikz faggots that share it..
Pretty good opener, punch wasn't that hardhitting though

I swear this little kid i smack the internet nerds who's flows lack the burn..
fruitcake u know u gonna take a loss, cause I give payback like tax returns..
Hahaha, that was a funny ass line, tight punch

Metaphorically Insane? stop copyin writs, and paste it, u think u a thief and shit?...
Like fiendish chicks-wit teeny tits-I leave yo wack herbish MT crew meaningless....
Ok line, but punch was not hardhitting
Its a unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative...
And 14yrs old kid is impoyd a already " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit....
Tight transition line, really kept it flowing with word play

=M-e-r-k-e-d=

Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight"..
Once again, another wordplay line, similar to my style

You was born wack wit a lyrical knife stuck in ya face and I guess no 'way' ta 'elevate..
Ok closer, I got what you was sayin, but didn't hit hard for me


In closing, I believe DV won this one because he was very consistent with his flow. MCs have come to think that you can win a battle on punchlines alone, which is not true. True elevated mcs rely on different parts of his technique instead of just one.

v-DV

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