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Old 06-05-04, 12:33 AM   #12
$MOKESKREEN
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Buck...You used "He" too much. Flow wasen't too bad but your structure wasen't really that good. Elevate a little on the vocab and you really didn't have many punches.

Jokah...pretty good spit. Nice structure and flow. You had some good punches and personals. Neither of you really had any multi's. Nice flow though.

Overall Vote...Da Jokah
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