weak...wack...battle

first smart

ima destroy thiz femonem emcee,wit hard punches daat'll be crushing ya teeth
leaving u dekapitated stuck under beneath,cuz i got a betta flow den boats on the sea

^^ femonem = feminine?...aiight

I feel u tryna come with the punches and metas...they needs serious work though...focus on making the metaphors connect with the punches

12/20


Can u believe he classified his location/
Prolly because hes at he masturbatin,and dont really want no altercation/
And speakin of masterbation,...this dude is wack/
And he wacks to that gay triple x in his backpack/


^^ Too simple with little complexity...add metas/wordplay to your punches


10/20


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