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IP:
Spiky2k8: was feeling ur lines...
Flow and Structure:
ur rhymes flowed pretty good through out ur structure was good aswell which added to it...
Vocab:
pretty good vocab... i would say u got an average one... you threw in a couple of complex words in here and there...
Punchlines and Personals:
you had a few... next time add a couple more in but the ones you had hit pretty hard...
Overall: 7.5/10
FallingAngel: wasn't really feeling ur verse
Flow and Structure:
ur flow was pretty good same with ur structure...
Vocab:
i would say ur vocab was the same as or a bit better than Spikeys... u had a few more complex words and a bit less basic...
Punchlines and Personals:
you didn't have that many and the ones you had didn't really hit all that hard...
Overall: 6.5/10
Vote: Spikey
because his punchlines and personals were better and also i thought his ryhmes were more origonal...
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