--A New Revelation--
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lmmfao at how outsider is gonna run his mouth after that verse......
structure was just terrible...and consistent...hence consistently terrible,every single line in there was waaaaaaaay too long....umm personals win battles and c-explicit obviously killed u in dat category....u had a line sayin somethin like "i think they were pre-written" thats just bad,u cant diss someone by sayin u think they did somethin thats not good....
vote-explicit for harder hittin punches and a structure that was much easier to read and made it flow a lot better
i will poll when i get enough posts
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