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Old 06-05-04, 05:49 PM   #8
DFrost
Flyweight
 
Posts: 157
From: NY
check it

IP:

aight, meters took this

killa, you did have a good amount of filler, poorly developed punches and your setup didn't go with the punch, your hottest line was
then beat him in the forehead wit a watch so u can say i'm beatin him around da clock/
the rest wern't really punches, had good vocab and some good ideas they just need to be worded differently

meters, your verse wasn't that great either, but ya had some harder punches with nice personals and sounded more expierienced and thats what got you the win