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Old 06-05-04, 10:06 PM   #13
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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L I.
you had nice flow and structure good punbches and personals u supplied links witch backed up ur eveidence and that i really like overall nice drop
work on ya flow and always work on coming harder with punches
bestline:Just like ya custom text…your access to shine on this site’s been forbidden…
Points startin to click that he sucks…cause he keeping his record hidden…
overall *8*
nice drop good job
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M
flow was wack okay structure and your punchlines dont make much sense at all
sorry but statin the truth
intestins and puberty?
ok anyway work on ur strcuture flow and kep workin on dos sensible punchlines and get rid of the garbage ones
overall *7*
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L I won easily
my vote LI
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