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Old 06-06-04, 01:52 AM   #7
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dam these verses was hott....$ik i expected a little more from you the shyt you drop in my crew auditions is hottter than this...you stretched your bars and forced them..your multies and wordplay was good tho but punches lacked creativity...you had some decent punches but nothing that really caught the eye...overall you had a good versee i think you could'a came hotter but still nice shyt

overall: 6/10

40cal...wooo ya verse was just fire the multies were sick as hell and i aint never seen nothing like that every other word ya shyt rhymed...lots of intensity in your piece but hardly any punches...but the punches you did throw was good...your structure was off but so was $ik's..flow was consistent tho

overall:6.5/10

vote: 40cal

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