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Old 06-06-04, 10:15 AM   #14
C-Explicit
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T-Storm got this fo sho...

Vinman
check it look at this fag he called the storm when hes fulled with softness and hes dickless/ pulling the damn trigger making this wannbe helpless

Breakdown of that line - It didnt rhyme, and there was NO structure in it... Fix that up..

Vinman - You didnt have really any good punches or personals, and your structure was horrible...

T-Storm - You won this by far.. your structure was good, you have rhymes,, you had punches..

Punches usually win battles... you had em.. you won...

Good battle..

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