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C-Explicit: ok ure structure was gud in places but most of ure lines were too stretched. this didn't help ure flow which was rather choppy in places. u hit some gud punches and some nice personals but u lackedi n creativity really. some of ure stuff was played and ure wordplay was pretty basic. OVERALL 7/10

Outsider: ok that was really weak i have to say but you are getting better. u still need to work on your structure cuz ure lines are far too stretched. ure flow was choppy and needs a lot of work to. u had punches but mostly they were all weak as were ure personals. u need to use more copmplex wordplay and shit and beef up ure punches and personals. OVERALL 6/10

V/ - C-Explicit

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