furious-Nice spit........You came good with the personals with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and
metaphores..Balacance was ok.....just work on a few things and ya will be there......

big-Came aight and good....Work on something, structure was ok
but work on some thing.....Multies Definitly need more
work.....But keep elevatin and work
v/furious

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