big-Nice spit........You came good with the punch lines some was pretty aight
....you had everything uncluding similies work on diffinitly the
metaphores..Balacance was ok.....just work on a few things and ya will be there......

D-Aight but not that good....Work on something, structure was ok
but work on some thing.....Multies Definitly need more also the similies and metaphores
work..Personals didnt have...But keep elevatin and workin on tons of things
v/big,,came harder

return the fav please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

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