i changed my title !!
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breakdown for l.i:
flow:nice flow i don't have problems with it 7/10
volcab:alright marginaly better then average 6/10
punches:alot of lines mainly of average quality fav line,"Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing…" alright job 7/10
overall:20/30
breakdown for deadly vision:
flow: some of the rhyming and multis were alittle shady but overall alright 7/10
volcab:good job nothing too advance though 6/10
punches:some alright personals nothing too strong though fav line,"Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight".." the big thing was the amount of them not being up around that of l.i 6/10
overall:19/30
vote--real close battle one of the better ones this week good job from both of you my vote is for l.i though
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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