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Old 06-06-04, 01:57 PM   #25
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for l.i:

flow:nice flow i don't have problems with it 7/10

volcab:alright marginaly better then average 6/10

punches:alot of lines mainly of average quality fav line,"Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing…" alright job 7/10

overall:20/30

breakdown for deadly vision:

flow: some of the rhyming and multis were alittle shady but overall alright 7/10

volcab:good job nothing too advance though 6/10

punches:some alright personals nothing too strong though fav line,"Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight".." the big thing was the amount of them not being up around that of l.i 6/10

overall:19/30

vote--real close battle one of the better ones this week good job from both of you my vote is for l.i though
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league