i changed my title !!
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breakdown for killaconcepz:
flow:alittle shaky some of the bars weren't workin too while for me 5/10
volcab:good job you lose points cause it kinda wrecked your flow in spots but you got this down 6/10
punches:fav line,"can't be replenished-when i dissect till he can only be measured in inches/" nothing too damaging here alot of it didn't seem too strong 6/10
overall:17/30 pretty good verse
breakdown for meters:
flow:workin well no off spots good job 7/10
volcab:nice helped with the flow well 6/10
punches:fav line,"Atleast you're innovative with vocab...or are those just words spelled wrong?" good personal i liked all of your lines good job 7/10
overall:20/30
vote--meters ran away with this
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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