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Old 06-06-04, 07:30 PM   #7
Lethal Kahn
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Every 3 lines(short lines) = 1 bar. And since it's 16 lines(long lines), I get 8 bars. Can't change it, it's my structure.

Aight check it...

U represent wackness, coz that's what u are
why should i spit?...
...when u'll get merked by ur own bars!
No pulse, coz ima heart attack to ur health
he has no punches...
...so the bitch actually propped himself!
No need to state the winner, he already knows
coz even he said...
...that his death is "very close"!*
Ur an earthquake, but im what stops it
ur spits are so played...
...people come in and shop it!
Merken u, with my rhymes flowin around u
battlin' isn't enough?...
bitch ur lucky i dont fuckin' drown u!
I'm throwin punches, but u missed with bricks
u think this is wack?...
...ever actually read ur own spits?!
He's so wack, he posted a thread startin a crew
and till now...
...he didn't even get 1 view!
That's it, dont u know the game's over
can sumone get rid of him?...
...just take the "Dirt Off My Shoulder"!

* - Look above his status. It's written "very close".