bo-Work on everything...mainly was talkin about what you
are going to do to him..Need to have punches..Some was
aight but not good enuff..Similies need more aight
keep elevatin

SL-Pretty tight..SImilies and metaphore came but easy
enuff to beat him..You had everything but mainly came
aight..Similies and metaphore was aight but work on balance
v/SL Return the fav please

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