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Old 06-06-04, 10:12 PM   #21
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X-Came with everything including multies..and similies
Balance was stabled and evything...Punches lines did hit harder
which means he took this becuz of his personals and Metaphores
Structure wasnt too stratched. I also liked his closure

Seven-Came aight some aight verses but need more work
similies and metaphores need alot more work..Also the multies
only a few good lines..I will give ya the structure and balance but everything
needs work..keep elevatin

v/X hit harder return the fav in my battles please
X-Came with everything including multies..and similies
Balance was stabled and evything...Punches lines did hit harder
which means he took this becuz of his personals and Metaphores
Structure wasnt too stratched

Seven-Came aight some aight verses but need more work
similies and metaphores need alot more work..Also the multies
only a few good lines..I will give ya the structure and balance but everything
needs work..keep elevatin

v/X hit harder return the fav in my battles please


X-Came with everything including multies..and similies
Balance was stabled and evything...Punches lines did hit harder
which means he took this becuz of his personals and Metaphores
Structure wasnt too stratched

Seven-Came aight some aight verses but need more work
similies and metaphores need alot more work..Also the multies
only a few good lines..I will give ya the structure and balance but everything
needs work..keep elevatin

v/X hit harder return the fav in my battles please

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