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Old 06-07-04, 01:02 AM   #14
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Aight...........

MC's Reaper: you got a little off topic with the "I keeps a ghetto chick, that loves to blast and she peddle shit/Groupies fake moves, I get her to settle shit//" shit, in which you rhymed shit with shit, that's not good, you also rhymed right here and me twice as well, and you got a pretty weak punches where if you modify it a little it might have turned into dope punches. On the positive side, the flow was pretty good but thats about all..........

Mix Tape: Your shit was pretty good structured, it was also creative at some point, and the best thing bout your spit, is that your punches kept hitting hard, on the negative side, i didn't like the closer, but your shit is good overall, keep it up!

V/ Mixtape
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