aight, here's my vote, i'm voting cause nobody else would, lol.....

Spiky 2k8's verse: No creative word play
No grammer
No sense made
No stand out punches
and worst of all, NO RHYME
Otherwise, fine!
Enygma's verse:You probably intended to go easy but I've read better spits than this
but you definitely got the win in this, hands down for actually
rhyming each word well

Vote- Enygma for rhyming each word and for more creativity

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