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Old 06-07-04, 11:46 AM   #15
CaliCollegeGurl
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I don't know where to begin...

Street Legend started out strong then fell off. Ass rhymed with trash? Assistance with mention? Naw man. The last 2 lines saved face. Flow was aiight. Nothing to Call home about.


E-syde Thug- Umm, I think one thing you could do off bat is set your flow up so that your words that rhyme all land in about the same place. It would make your flow seem way better. Your personals weren't real, so that made your rhyme weaker too. This is all Street.

v/Street Legend