This was a pretty decent battle.... Both of you came with a few funny punchlines in this- for example

This fag got a Brave-Mouth, but tha only thing I hear from this Individual is Gay-Shouts//
You gettin ASS in tha PARK aint what I mean when I say ya gonna get "LAID-OUT"//
We on two Different-Levels, watch me Spank-Him-N-Leave-His-Bars-Dead//
I got this Bitch-Disheveled cuz like a PUSSY that STINK I'm Deflatin-this-HARD-HEAD//
and Your Closer was pretty funny too.....

and for Wordsmith...
Orange!? Kids feminine and wack..u know who Im better than
Jackson avy? O,like Michaels Park..his punches will Never-Land
Blah, you're no competition..and you've reached worthless
And since Reap thought he was the topic........
.......I just defeated the purpose.-

I found the "avoid the doctors" line really well thought out- creative also... I think all in all Wordsmiths Verse was much better structured in that his bars didn't stretch so much- I think you both had good punchlines but Wordsmiths were better, he had a better setup and punch combo in most circumstances- using less words with more descriptive value. Good Job from both of you -I could see others on this site voting either way but Ima have to go With Wordsmith on this one. Please return the favor with an Honest Vote..... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

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