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Old 06-07-04, 02:09 PM   #6
Know-Gimix
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This battle was o.k... I think Punchline Princes structure was better, overall- but both kinda lacked flow and neither had any really killer punchlines but I think Wild Fire had a better closing bar and he shows slightly more complex punchlines... You gotta work on your structure though kikko- it looks really sloppy the way your bars keep changing format and length through the verse. I think even though Punchline Princes punchlines were more basic, I think Wild Fires Structure killed his verse.. Vote Punchline Prince.. Please return the favor.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356
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