Thug-Came wit eveything but kindof weak....Nothing to really work on juss
to make your punches hit harder...structure was nah..need balance
work on similies and metaphores but nice spit

Lover-No you came kindof weak..need to work on everything
structure was aight but need lil more work..keep workin at it

v/thugzy

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