whitey-Close but work on alot of things....similies
and metaphores.balance and structure is what you
have...kind of stayed on topic
keep elevatin

C-Nice pretty good but need more work....Came to beat him
but you was aight...pretty tight with punches but
pretty good

v/c return the favor please...D/rin me http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

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