Ya see , ya either . . 1.weak 2.laim or 3.dope , G
But ya must be 1 or 2 cos I`m already number 3
This was kind of basic- not great for an opener.
i`m beating you down with ease . . & i'm imputing no such effort . .
It's Sympathy ya called a vet . . or is it ya 36-4 record . .
Not really feelin this... you really didn't insult him with this, more like a compliment.
Getting garden tools for herbs – really sucks . but it's a job
When im on aim -L.I's always like "What do ya think of my lines dawg"
decent.
Ya horrible with write's.. tripl n merked you , but ya know what's worse..
Making gay excuses like . ." it was a three minute no show verse"
egh, I see where you were tryin to go
I’ll show no mercy & rip this cat . . so he can drop his best line . .
This kid’s 14 on puberty . . so yeah L.I means little Intestines
Im not feelin this closer, I think your flow throughout was kinda choppy and the punches weren't very solid... ez.
Thought you were a top head and considered somewhat a vet…
Your own crew has awards and ur name aint even come up yet…
lol- this was a funny opening punch, i enjoyed
Got ya the wish bone and u drawed the small end, all luck’s gone…
Reason you have so many names, couldn’t decide what to suck on…
I see where you were tryin to go here but not really feelin the punch. good flow though
Out of my league…our verses don’t even need to be compared…
Quit the game cause like your avatar…your going no where…
decent personal-
Used to like this kid…he’s been exposed and there his grip went…
I mean what kind of herb makes an audio callout wit out equipment…
lol- funny punch with a good flow
Just like ya custom text…your access to shine on this site’s been forbidden…
Points startin to click that he sucks…cause he keeping his record hidden…
I dont really feel the way you worded this, but the punchline was still o.k.... All in all i think you had a better flow and a better grasp of your punchlines, your structure stayed on through-out and I honestly feel it was the stronger of the two... Vote- L.I- Please return the favor...
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...56&page=1&pp=15