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Old 06-07-04, 04:44 PM   #12
Know-Gimix
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Rip This Kid After this battle theres gonna be no Nigga-insight-
u paraplegic and u wanna fistfight whole life u was wrong try to get dis right-
Not a great punch- decent first line, bad opener as a whole.
i saw his pic dude looks like a gay fag from queer eye for the straight guy-
you wack fam your shits way underground mines passed the sky-
this wasn't good- choppy flow, and the punch was really basic.
get merked afraid to get hert.sit on my rhymes ya ass'll get brunt-
flow changes the weather currantbattlin me? ill make you wish you werent-
not good... lots of missspelled words, choppy flow and the punch is weak.
its ova dont even drop kids rock and roll dont know nothin bout hiphop-
even if the highest level was a chair you couldnt reach the top-
Basic punch here- but Ill give you credit its better than the others.
retire quick rhymes are thick....straight take off your head-
get hit with the lead....gettin beat 5-0 like u was part of the Feds-
this was the best bar in your verse.. it flowed well, the wordplay at the end made this a pretty stiff punch...

Ten minutes for a thin skinned emcee is more than enough..
U claimed u were unbeatable in text..but I called your bluff..(5-0 in topical)
decent flow, not great for an opener but it was a personal factual diss so it gets points.
I saw ur pic dawg..ur a lil skinny to be bitin' off more than u can chew..
I got 50 FUCKIN' PMs of YOU beggin me to be in ur crew..it's true..
lol- this was funny.... metas and similies are great but when you can diss someone with factual information thats personal it really helps a verse.
Blood is thicker than water..u callin' me FAM tryna scam a few votes..
Well, I'm like Honest ABE..so I must tell you that your talent's a JOKE..
Not great, good flow.. I didn't really feel the punch cuz it was a little basic.
Ur a suburbanite tryna front like u murder..right, and u gettin' burned..
I'll slap u so hard, make u got back to ur first style when u were herb..
Not really feelin this either, the flow is choppy- not a great punch.
Who even respects you kid..you're not mentioned in the top 10 at all..
Beat me?..nah, ur style funky like drawls..before u walk u gotta cralw..
This wasn't a great closer here either.... I think you kinda fell off in your verse throughout... But your first couple lines were better than Killas closer which was the only verse I really liked from him so Ima give you the battle... Vote Nsight.... please return the favor..... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...56&page=3&pp=15
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