I feel like Mc Reaper had stronger punchlines in this... you had good use of wordplay also, the only thing I think you need to work on is your structure cuz ya lines stretch a little bit.. I felt a couple of Street Legends lines but I think Reapers verse was a little more complex... Vote Reaper.. Please return the fav..
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