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Old 06-07-04, 05:49 PM   #16
Know-Gimix
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I feel like Mc Reaper had stronger punchlines in this... you had good use of wordplay also, the only thing I think you need to work on is your structure cuz ya lines stretch a little bit.. I felt a couple of Street Legends lines but I think Reapers verse was a little more complex... Vote Reaper.. Please return the fav.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356
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