You Stay Third-Grade-Turd-Face- You as Dumb as Your Friends
How you gonna elevate -Can't Even spell "above" or "ascend"
The head of ya crew's Massively-fake- Just Like You
Cuz ya rhymes as reality based- as Chucky-2
Keep Callin me a Newb, It'll be Funnier when I win-This


^^ haha...rhyming similar to my style...nice (lol, yes patting myself on the back)...kinda imature punches...but shit made me laugh...so it works well enough

I am "SevenThirds the Greatness Ya crew will Ever Be"
2.3 Times or 200 plus percent-- thanks for mentioning

^^ Nice personals there...

22/30

This nigga is so played if he tried to be president he still wouldnt be on dolla bills
Becuz its really easy to murk someone who still rides his bike with trainin wheels
Murked this guy seventhird so much left him homeless so hes tryin to stay on a grime


^^^ Not feeling your opener...where's the diss..? how is him being on a dollar bill or not a punch...?

Yo can tell hes like 6 years old, Look at the bottom of his spit, its his bed time
The Quotin things is pretty old to the site why dont you wake up to ya reality
SevenThird is on the site 24 7 and now I juss murked him and left him with no personality

^^ Good attempt at personal...but needed to be worded better

Improve upon flow

20/30

Vote: 7/3