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Old 06-07-04, 07:56 PM   #11
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I'm twisted ?!?! wait this guy's good ? then explain his shit verse . .
Damn If HE's A VET . .Why again Is he Making a n00b spit FIRST?!?
fuck , i'm ripping this cat & i wont stop killing em - truth is beware.
yep you'll be [b[rookie[/b] of the month . . . for about a million years

^^ NOOB spit 1st lines are played and corny.PERIOD. flow is ok...but this stop and go rhyming of yours can get annoying...and you either BIT that million years LINE or this is an ALIAS...so You best explain...cuz Im going to STROBE...

Surrender yourself no resist me fool . . i can break you apart bitch .
& dont worry about losing respect . . cos you had NON to start with,
am i hitting you hard ... well not as hard as i hit wholes in ya bitch.
& really fuck HIS CREW , when even my mouse roll's with a click .

^^^ this is clever wordplay...but as a punch, it doesn't do much damage to him...rather filler-ish


20/30

You a soft bitch cryin that you gotta go first…I don’t care!!//
And this bitch couldnt "wipe shit" if he was the "charmin bear"//
This guy cant be real.. a rappers one thing this singer aint..//
This is the Art of War, Insight came ready with Finger paint//


^^^ This is a good opener...and I think MEZ is SOUL SKRIPTZ cuz that Line about "being a rookie for a million years" looks familiar...Plus, he whined like a BITCH in our Battle about me making him post first when that wasn't even the case. So, in my opinion, this opener is enough to rip his whole fucking verse.


PERIOD.


Vote: DELEON...harder hitting punches.PERIOD.


Ps. White Powder...I beat Deleon 5-1...so, um...maybe I should be rookie of the month

hehehe


MEZ is SS yall

Im out

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