I stand tall…. and I walk thru you ground like tribal/
I aint liable for yo death cause to me yo life aint vital/
I got ryme ammunitaion that can pack missle silos /
my flow shoots fire like volcanoes/


^^ 1st two lines are devastating...pretty nice there..hard hitting


I got words that can make ya flip/
My shit is oscar nominated like steven spielberg scripts/
The only way this nigga can ever manage to spit/
Is when he turns fagit and he suck those dicks…//

^^ decent...rather boastful...but still good punches


23/30

My fingers gripped on, a.k. triggers...
don't like p.r.'s cuz because i'm Pro-Wigger.../
my flow in unbreakable to this kids weekness...
...rican more PRO-gay marrige...
just because he eats dicks.../

^^ way too simple...where are the punches?

cuz only two things cry, babies and peurtoricans.../
i'm accomplished, still unable to tell what its like without fans...
becasue didnt even call me out, and still get bitchslapped with both hands.../


^^ work on structure


20/30

Vote: Pro..better verse.PERIOD