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Old 06-07-04, 10:20 PM   #11
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From: Rochester for now
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dis nigga gonna be a breeze,
look at dis nigga alwayz on his knees,
^Weak Opener' ..!!!! 0/10 ?? WTF Was This.. lol

suckin tell they get horny and pee,
dont even act real,cant even spell his name,
^No Rhyme Scheme .... ?? Ummm 'Pure Trash' .. 0/10

hes c-queen,i got cousin that spell betta than u and there only 3,
u 2 dum 2 say ya ABC,tryin 2 be lyke me a true gangsta,
^Again' ... No Rhyme Scheme.. What Do You Call This...

fo u i told 50cent 2 make tha video WANSTA,so dont even act kool,
givin blowjobz when they sit on tha bar stool,so letz get dis battle dun,
^Aint Nothing..!!' .. What Happened You Fell Off In Every Line...!! ?? 0/10

u dont measure up 2 me u juzz a average one,
dont even no how 2 hold a gun,hes a bitch azz one!!!
^Lmfao' .. !! You Stupid For Real .. Playa .. But Since Y0u Put Some Effort Into Your Last Bar.. I Will Cutt You Some Slacck And Give You A 3/10 ..

!! Alright' ...

BreakDown For C-Quence:

understand your message, what the fuck was you sayin?
i didnt recognize one real verse, dawg you must have been prayin
^Already Took This Battle With His First Line' .. And Opener' .... 6/10 Not To Bad' .. But Still Weak!!

im like a steam-roller, smashin the tar on a new road
you gettin ate by this snake, ima smash you like a toad
^Where's The Punch Playa??? 1/10

my geometrical designs will shatter and tear you down
youll be countin my decible rhymes that chatter your town
^Nice Bar' With A Decent Punch!! .. 7/10

you got no skill son, no RHythimic Process
you think you ill son, you prolly cross-dress
^Lol Prolly True' ..!! 9/10 Best Punch Out Of Your Whole Verse' ...

im gona end this shit, by spelin lik u
cuz u stink real bad, n smel like doo-doo
^Weak Closer But I Can Understand Where You Are Coming From lol.. Didn't Even Need To Come With More Then 2Lines' ..!!!

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