Toxic-Work on spit....Aight spit though
but similies need work just like metaphores...
But you did good...Punches was aight
but work on them..Structure was decent


Meta-Good spit....But try harder aight
you was there but then woop...Went down
But good try with the structure

v/Toxic

Return the favor in this one for me votin in yours and takin the time

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

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