renegade-Nice spit in a way...Things
still need to be worked on like similies and
vocab...Need more of those and structure was aight


Sik-Pretty good almost but renegade was tight..
Structure is what ya had....And metaphores but everything
else when nah...but nise try keep elevtin

v/Renegade Return the favor please fam http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

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