willnova better flowing verse. better punches and personals. 8th you was aight but nothing to good. you wrote alpt of bullshit. get st8 to the point next time, don't beat rounf the bush. you need beteer pucnhes and lyrics. oh yeah your structure was fucked too, try not to stretch you lines, if you have good punches it will shoe in you verse, keep writtin. willniva u need to elevate 2, step up you multi's and punches too, cuz you thinkin u the shit.

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