Ravage-Came aight bui verse too stretched..Work on
those and the similies anfd the metaphores..
nice spit drop..Punches aight but work lil more


Dawg-Aight...Pretyt good but went off..
Similies had buit no metaphores or multies..
Atleast your structure was aight...Wasnt to stretched

v/ravage..Return the favor For me votin in this..or people will disrespect you becuz
you aint returnin the favor.....

Heres link http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...907#post1335907

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