plus-aight spit...Lil aight
need lots of work on readin
catagories thing....Balance and structure
was aight
C.G-Pretty good..Work on alot of
things though to improve..Metaphores
was there but not the similies..Balance
was stabled
v/C.G. Return thre favor please in this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356