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Old 06-08-04, 05:16 PM   #17
KillaCamFlow
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I liked ur rhyme it was pretty complex i liked thew wordplay.Ya need to work on Personals and Punches.They were ok but i think u need to elevate on them....ya know wat i mean.....maybe u just did not put much effort in it idk lol

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Ur rhyme was pretty good.The Struc was really good.the personal really hit hard u had a few personals they hit him.Ya wordplay and flow was good but the wordplay needed a little better work..I think u won trhis battle....
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