CS...I gotta give it up to you for keeping at it after what people say to you. I mean, there is sum basic shit that you could easily fix. For instance don't rhyme roc with rock with rock. It's just a bad idea. You should read the section on advice from other MC's cuz I see you got the passion and think it could help your flows a lot. I'm just a newbie like you, but this is from one newbie to another...all luv.

This battle goes hands down to Killa.

v/Killa