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Old 06-08-04, 08:25 PM   #14
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okay....IS gets it.....this was clearly a topical battle and spawn did not honor that..whether he didn't know or not is irrelevant...anyways...IS...some advice...you had soem good ideas...and good topics..good thoughts..but it was wayyyy too jumpy...like you went from one thing to the next....it's like you couldn't stay on one topic...maybe thats what you were goin for because it;'s whats goin on in the world...but next time..I reccomend cutting out half of the ideas you used...and adding atleast two times what you originally had to each idea so that there all complete..anyways...not a bad drop...keep bangin...2 fingas one love

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