black sinz:
you had much better flow and a better verse all around
you painted a vivid picture in my head and thats what i liked most
about your verse... you kept it flowing very nicely... and i liked that alot also
i dont know about that structure though it was kinda messed up u know...
im not truley sure but to me it made your verse much harder to read...
you obviously had a nice verse that impressed me but work on ur structure..
thats all! overall *7*

va you did nice but..meh it wasnt nothing special
you need to work on flow structure and pretty much evrything
not bad at all keep it going but i didnt feel you could match up to black sinz
he had a better all around verse.. it was good
but va u need to work on flow and structure always elevate and stay pimp

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